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The March

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Blinded by the gunshot flares, the taste of blood is in the air. Step by step, we do not feel. It hardly feels real, but for the screaming. Soulds already lost to the wind. I no longer hear. Into the light. Lost to the wind. Free from the march.
ok, so my school holds a 50 word short story contest every year and this is what I entered. I wrote it in about a half hour in history class to hand it in the next period. We're learning about WW2, since it appears to connect to the piece. The Japanese army and the bombing of Hiroshima to be exact. XD

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whoa, awesome, especially with only 50 words. O.O